1. Zoe Armitage
For this question, it is clear by the
results that the film idea was clearly
communicated to the group.
For this question, I think that we
could have been more enthusiastic
by using a different tone of voice
instead of rushing the words.
For these results I think that we
could have told a bit more about the
film to make the audience
interested.
For these results I think that we
needed to use more eye contact to
make sure that we were addressing
the group properly.
For this question I think that we got
positive feedback but to improve the
results I think that we could have
used a log line that got them more
interested in the film and comment
more on where we got our
influences from.
For questions 6 and 7 I think that we
got positive feedback for the
originality of the idea and the clear
delivery, although the negatives
would be that we need to use eye
contact and to answer any questions
with confidence.

2. Zoe Armitage
Overall I think our group produced what we were going to say well, although we all need to have more
confidence when delivering the pitch including eye contact, speak clearly and have a more relaxed body
language.